She is my mystery

by Fsams   Mar 4, 2007


The sun hid behind the horizone
When she respired into this world
The berries in my garden ripped
When she closed her eyes and smiled

The roses in my garden bloomed
On the way home when she glanced
Eminent waves of fragrance blew
Along the way she cat-walked

The clouds scudded while I scuttled
Fusty men with musty idears
Getting giddy betting dizzy
Looking at your fair visage

Vampires are out of cemetery graves
Just to be her friends or slaves
I just peeped like a rocket
To see who was in her locket

I don't want to miss the boat
Coz I love her and I dote
She is my mystery
The mystery in my history.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Superb description n the imagery is vivid. lovely piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very original piece. It isn't classic love poem, which is great. You created unique atmosphere. Flow is excellent and this piece is written greatly.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was very creative. your mind with writing is just beautiful. the way you express the idea is undeniably amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Very metaphorical and creative. 5/5 worth piece

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    100% descriptive and i liked it coz it had a unique style.