This way for long

by Fsams   Mar 4, 2007


When i felt in love with you
I felt shy to tell you too
That the love was purely true
I like you and I love you

I think of you all the time
So I feel my love will rhyme
If you feel shy you can mime
I'll be near you all the time

Caress me and love me too
I'll be there to share the woe
Love in my heart is for you
For you all the things I do

Days and moments will pass by
You'll remain in my sky
I'll console when you cry
I'll love you till I die

I'll stay this way for long
With you I would not go wrong
With you i would feel so strong
I sing this song ding ding dong

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Wow simple n sweet.
    I enjoyed this love twinkle twinkle.
    gr8

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I have added you into my favorite. hope that is ok, but your poems are just amazing. i love the concept of this one. it was lovely to read and it was so sweet 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Wow this is a great poem and the nice rhythm really caught my attention. Lovely love poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Simple and sweet dear so sweet. Just like twinkle twinkle. 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "I'll stay this way for long
    With you I would not go wrong
    With you i would feel so strong
    I sing this song ding ding dong"

    ^ Love the ending... Very creative & I've never seen anything quite like it... The emotions were strong & the flow was flawless. Wonderful job! Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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