by Wings Of Flames Mar 4, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
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As I split the curtain, |
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This was a well written poem I thought. I didn't much understand it, but I guess that's just because I'm not very bright. I did like the rhymes though, and the flow was well structured and fluent. Anyway, I'd better be going, hope to read more from you in the future |
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I suck at comments. |
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I suck at comments. |