Spoiled Rotten Cherry

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Mar 4, 2007


Years have past,
And our friendship remains.
Miles have come between us,
Not preventing our conversations,
Just inviting more to say.

I still hold you close,
We are best friends until the end,
Like the childhood promise we made;
Happy 14th Birthday,
My [spoiled rotten] Cherry.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    This is my favourite out of the two cherry poems i don't think you need rhymes for a good poem really... isn't it "spoilt" not "spoiled" hmm im not sure but yeah "Miles have come between us,
    Not stopping our talking,
    Just inviting more to say" i can relate to that sooo much!! xxxx thanks xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    I liked this except this part:
    Miles have come between us,
    Not stopping our talking,
    Just inviting more to say.

    I don't know.. It just doesn't sound right to me. but great poem! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    As I said, great poem. I lie this one better! 5/5
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This one just comes right out and speaks the truth, you wrote it exactly how you feel. great job 5/5