Spoiled Rotten Cherry

This is my favourite out of the two cherry poems i don't think you need rhymes for a good poem really... isn't it "spoilt" not "spoiled" hmm im not sure but yeah "Miles have come between us,
Not stopping our talking,
Just inviting more to say" i can relate to that sooo much!! xxxx thanks xxxx

I liked this except this part:
Miles have come between us,
Not stopping our talking,
Just inviting more to say.

I don't know.. It just doesn't sound right to me. but great poem! 5/5

~Kristina

As I said, great poem. I lie this one better! 5/5
PV

This one just comes right out and speaks the truth, you wrote it exactly how you feel. great job 5/5