Spoiled Rotten Cherry--This one rhymes

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Mar 5, 2007


Years have past,
And our friendship still lasts.
Even between the miles,
Thinking about you still brings smiles;
Even if we are apart,
We will always be together at heart.
Happy 14th Birthday,
My [spoiled rotten] Cherry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Annabel

    The other one is so much better. This just sounds like you've tried to write a poem - whereas the other has real feelings in it... (Y) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rebecca

    How cute is that!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    I like this one this BEST! the other one was good too, but this one was better! so i think you should give her this one! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aw this was a sweet lil diddy. well done hun.
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I like this one, but I think the other one is better. True, they both say the same thing, but the rhythm's better in the other one, I think! 5/5 anyway! :D
    PV

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