Come in with the rain (Contest)

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Mar 5, 2007


Baby it's looking cold tonight,
It's growing dark out there,
I can't wait for you to walk through the door,
And escape the arctic air.

The fire is stoked and crackling,
The lights are warm and dim,
Inside is so inviting,
When the outside is so grim.

So hurry now, it's getting late,
The rain begins to pour,
No need to ring the bell or knock,
For I'll be waiting by the door.

I'll peer out the window every now and then,
Just to see when you will show,
I hope you have your coat and hat,
For I think it's starting to snow.

I see a shadow in the night,
As the lightening strikes the sky,
Kick off your boots and step inside,
So I can hold you until you're dry.

Baby just come in with the rain,
As the thunder roars above,
Darling you have made it home,
You have come home to your love.

*I wrote this for a contest hosted by Britt! Thank you so much for the inspiration Hun!*

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  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Great poem. Great flow, good vocab. Very sweet and the imagery was good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, this is amazing. It flowed so well & was so sweet. It had a lot of emotion in it & was beautifully written.

    The imagery in this, really captivated me. It was so touching.

    Beautifully written.

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Ohh. I loved every bit of this poem. It was so ... ahh.. i cant find the right word to use. I LOOVEDD IT though. a major 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Woah nice write I hope you win it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    It was good poem and it was really good read 5/5 from me

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