Love can destroy faster then we'd like to think...

Dam that is good...and you said it was crap? how? it is really really good. love sam

This was a sad story. Great structure and a good rhyming technique.

Keep at it =)

This is very sad.. its heartbreaking when you see the one you love with someone else, especially if they say that they love you. Just remember though it they say they loved you they would be with you, not with someone else.

Awww very sad poem about loving/liking someone who is not with you. i can defiantely relate to this. you did a great job on it! 5/5

~Kristina

Awwww thats so sad....I soo have to give you 5/5 keep it up.

Wow. you are a really amazing writer/poet. =D *has added to favs*

5/5

-Linds[[xx]]

Wow...this poem's outta the world...
i cried...
5/5
loved readin this
added u to my favs as well

ps=i think u'll like my poem murder or suicide...
if u like it pls vote & comment

love
amy

Omg, Wow great poem, great rhime, great choice of words, Deffinateally 5/5! This poem is amazeing!

I LOVED it...trully beautiful...sensational...great job...5/5

I absolutely adore the ending to this poem... its perfect... the flow is a little off in places but the word choice is spectacular... you describe everything so well :D

Absolutly LOVED the last stanza..i was amazing..i liked it better than any stanza in the whole poem...i think there was a small part that threw me off cause it was also used in the poem i read b4, but all else was the percet blend of words, thoughts and emotions...AWESOME JOB 5/5 again:)

Thats a really touching poem 5/5

Wow i know what it feels like and I know it hurts like hell im so sry great poem!!

Awwww. your work is some of the best on this sight. i need to make sure your in my favorites!

Wow...this is such a great poem!! I absolutely LOVE it!! It's sad but true...You talk alot about cutting...I hope that's just in words and not in action...5/5