by Unrequited Mar 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Take that big eraser |
Great job!!! Like it!!! |
Oh my....lovely.. |
Great piece, every stanza is amazing and the imagery is really powerful. |
The first stanza was off to a rough start but after you get going it is amazing.... you could take out the first stanza and it would be perfect... (without putting first stanza into judgement i'm giving you a 5/5) |
by David
Well this was well finished. it was a bit long but i wouldn't want it to be any other way. well done! |