Let Me Give My Life to You

by supaflyhonkyguy   Mar 6, 2007


I would cross the stormy desert
Just so I could catch a glance
Of the only smile ever
To truly make me live
I will cherish every moment
That we could ever spend

Let me give my life to you

I would climb the highest mountain
Swim across the deepest sea
I would stop the world from turning
If it brought you close to me
I will cherish every moment
That love could ever bring

Let me give my life to you.....

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  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This is a beautiful love poem, Curtis. "Let me give my life to you," is phrased perfectly. That statement could easily lose its meaning with the wrong context, but you pull it off. A very strong write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Coeur Cassa Sage

    That is so sweet!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow amazing poem you have written! i really enjoyed reading it! you did a wonderful job on writing it! keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    There wasnt any real rhyming pattern but that didnt make the slighest bit of different.. this poem is beautiful. i just love it hun. i dont know what else to say.. well done.
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Take away "Let me give my life to you..." You don't need it. If you fix the tense of the other part of the poem...it would be great by itself. I already like it without those two repetitive lines. =) Hopefully that didn't sound too mean!

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