I shall sit here, without wail
Thinking, hoping, praying, wondering
About my forgotten fairy tale

my favorite lines in the whole poem were these great job
Take Care
xoHSxo

Mm i like this. i dont know what to say about this poem. but i like the connection. the poems good. 5/5.

This is a very clever poem. I love the way it is constructed and the flow. Like others who commented I found the imagery quite powerful. Exceptional poem!

Aww this was so sad. it was so well written though! i wish there was a fairy god mother out there for all of us. well done babe,
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Wow, reading this i do agree, you made me think, this life is basecly a movie nothing else. it will end no matter a happy end or a sad end, all it matter is it does end one day. nice word and nice poem, i really enjoyed reading it, specially the word MOVIE where you took me to a different world of thinking.

I love the rhyming you usd in the poem, and I love the comparison.

Wonderful "comparison" of sorts, great rhyming, fabulous flow... I loved it.

Really sad, but beautiful. Sometimes the flow is a little off, but the meaning is so strong it stays really good. So beautiful, you're really talented!

This was really sad and yet really beautiful. Your "ever after" is definitely out there and he'll sweep you right off your feet.

I thought this poem was really nicely written which flowed really well.