I really like this poem. It was truly heartfelt.

This was wonderful. I'm sure that a lot of people would say this but I feel exactly the same 95% of the time, like I'm standing behind a glass wall and I'm screaming for help, for anyone to care about my pain, but no one either hears or cares.
Hold on. We are never alone no matter what and the few good days are well worth holding on or thats what I keep having to tell myself everyday all day.
Keep up the great writing and remember, things will get better

I lovely poem, comes straight fromt he heart where real poetry lies, i like your work alot it reminds me of the pain i ahve once felt, n to think, i will neva know exactly ow u think as everybody feel things oin different ways but i think i can relate to things you describe in your poems 5/5. i hope you will read a few of mine please, i would really appreciate it. xxtake carexx

I enjoyed this one also. its so sad. the rhyming does a lot to this poem. great job! 5/5.

Amazing poem. it's very heartfelt and reaches out to people in similar situations. thanks for sharing this with us.

Your poems break my heart. they so
well written you have so much talent
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I do really like your poem its breaks my heart sometimes i feel the same and no one notice its true that's because people like to avoid the truth and live alie... keep going its really nice :)

Omg! this poem was awesome. i really felt what you were sayin, and the rhyme scheme was great 100/5! i can really relate to this. could i post your poem on my myspace?

Very well done. I flowed very well, and gave almost a story that was taking place. It had a rhythm and it had a style very well thought of. Great Job!

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

Nice poem. I feel that way all the time. Just stay strong no matter how hard it is. If u ever need to talk i will be willing to talk with ya..i know how it feels

Love the poem.. sometimes i feel like this

Wow. this is a really really good one.

i like it a lot.

Hey hun, just wanna let you know that your poem was absolutely wonderful. You are not alone! There are many of us in the same situation. "Runaway love-Ludacris/Mary J Blige" but you are very good with your words, you have a gift young one. Embrace it!

Wow. this poem is amazing. you have alot of talent and i can really relate to where your words are coming from. cant wait to see more of your work. keep it up =]

Omg i love that poem and i feel like that every day ..... dont stop writing poems you are very good at it

You dont understand how that poem relates to me sooooooo much well 5/5

Wow!!!!!! i really like this. i can really relate to this alot of the time, and it hurts when no one notices. i love this!!!!! it's really good. keep it up, you're an awesome writer.

Great job...thatz how i feel everyday of my life...broken into 100 pieces and yet no one notices...5/5

I have been reading your work for quite some time and commented and messaged often. U suddenly stopped responding and I hope I hadn't offended u somehow. Anyhow, I admire your talent and share lifes misery. If someone hasnt experienced the devastation of the soul, the torment that shatters taking away what made life matter then they could never comprehend the pain one feels when you live broken inside. I didnt know it could go deeper yet, Im no longer broken I have completely shattered. Ireland, you have touched my heart forever please never stop writting.