AMAZING! That's one of my favorite books! I don't know what you're talking about this poem was so good! I think this is seriously one of my favorite poems! The flow was very good. I usually like rhyming poems more, because it usually makes the flow better, but i don't think this poem needed to rhyme. I think if it rhymed it would have ruined the poem. So great job!
This is the first poem of yours I have read, and I really like it! Its been quite a while since I'd read that book, but I love the poem! There is a stanza or two in the middle that doesn't quite flow with the rest (as if I have a right to comment about that!! :) ), but overall its a very powerful poem that reads really well. Great job!