As I look Around

by justin   Mar 8, 2007


As i look around i see frowning faces and tears dropping down.where am i,do i need to be found.i know this world is round but,not for sure because looking in to the government's eyes, i only see lies.how can people still even try?? so as i look around, i notice I'm trying to be found.my hearts racing with fear,I'm scared.so the pain that i have only comes out in silent sounds with tears.so as i look around,I'm found i see lights that are bight with white.a voice of a whisper comes to me saying ,shhhhh quiet child not a sound,you came to me from the ground.my heart starts to pound, I've found happiness and joy.the angle had saved me.i see my old family,the clock strikes seven and to my surprise ,i look around ,I'm in heaven.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poseur

    Beautifully written, you did a great job. i especially loved the ending; it gave a such a mental picture. you have a way with words. :)