Missing you

by josh mills   Mar 8, 2007


I miss you so much
most of all i miss your touch
i miss the way you talk
i miss the way you roll your hips when you walk
i cant seem to forget about you
why did you leave me
was it something i did or said
i cant get your voice out of my head
i cant even sleep in my bed
cant you see im nothing without you
i cant get you out of my head
everything i do or listen to i cant forget you
if i asked you to take me back
would you

would you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Leona

    Wow this is great i love it...................
    Great job
    Leona

  • 17 years ago

    by Dyami

    Omg...i almost started crying...that is so sweet..I love it...if you get a chance, try reading mine...only if you'd like to though ^0^

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I understand your pain! Be strong! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    ok honest opinion, i like the way rhyme and the flow of this poem but i thought the subject and just overall it was al ittle cliche. At the end i think it should have a question mark, and you needed to use punctuation to make it better. I mean you used none and that kinda put me off. ANywyas i sad poem thought i think it would be better if you put it in the sad love peom section. Keep writing! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by josh mills

    I hope evry one like my newest one

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