Comments : For That Butterfly

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good! i defiantly enjoyed reading this very much! i think you did a wonderful job on it. it flowed nicely. keep it up 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    This was perfect,i liked especially those

    Do not kill that butterfly,
    Give it a life
    Whenever I see you.

    Keep it up
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. It's great, please keep up the great work:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Love it as always, beautiful love poem, you always know how to make it work!!! 5/5 of course like always.

  • 17 years ago

    by Joe

    Really nice poem. Nice choose of words and i loved how flowed together. Plus it reminded me of something between my gf and I. Just keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Oo luv the poem!! i wrote a poem called somethin like it but its bout somethin else....luv it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This poem is just so cute, Goran. I enjoy reading your work. You are so sweet. I enjoy comments from you (and everyone else); I like how I don't always have to ask you for them.

    I wasn't too sure on the grammar of the poem though. You were missing some word that are needed. At the end, TOLD, not tell.

    <3 best of wishes!

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    You have really fabulous poems. But I really like this one. Because I can relate to it. I also happen to LOVE the title. <3 Great job! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    Quite interesting indeed. The way these simple words are beautifully used, to the pacing. It makes it short and sweet. Nicely done. ^_^x

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Another great poem.
    I liked it alot.
    5/5
    take care.

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Beautiful poem, the symbolism was excellent and I loved that you chose a butterfly. You're an amazing writer, keep the poems coming! :)

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    The symbolism is great in this poem. Despite that it's short, you discussed very well you're intended message. I thought the butterfly was a excellent choice for your connotation, kudos.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very interesting quick fix for your fan club! Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well i was sad that you deleted the other poem. but this one is a nice one to take its place.

    5/5 always. David