by Cherish Mar 8, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
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Using words to shelter from the rain, |
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I like this one.. its a great poem! |
by Rebecca
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Beautiful poem. It flows very nicely within each stanza. Keep up the good work! |
by Tricky Daze
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This is my favorite of these 3,it proves that you're good at dark poems |
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This poem flowed wonderfully with a flawless rhyme scheme that did not distract from the point of the poem. I personally would have felt more comfortable with angelic you, but angel you works for me as well |
by Yuna
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Wow! Bravo! Bravo! Thos poem was truly captivating, and I want to read it again, and again! I haven't read this style before, and found it refreshing. If you can write another poem like this one, I would surly be happy to read it! |