True

by Just Keara   Mar 8, 2007


That first time I saw you,
I was like "Damn, why is he staring?"
Not even knowing that,
Soon for you I'd be caring.

All that day you spoke to me,
But I acted like, "whatever."
I never thought at all,
That I'd want us to be together.

I said you had nice eyes,
And to my surprise, you smiled at me shyly,
From then on when I saw you,
I was always smilin.

Soon we alked and I really began to feel you.
I wanted you to feel that way as well,
Now it's too late,
But at least I know you do.

The night we said goodbye,
Was unbearably hard.
For I had grown to care a lot about you,
You were now in my heart.

For three days straight,
I could only cry.
And for a short while during that time
I couldn't understand why.

I mean, sure you were a friend,
And I'd miss you like crazy.
And I knew our chance of being together, if you stayed,
Was more than a maybe.

Then I came to realize why,
It had started with that first hug.
I was so sad not because I liked you a lot,
Nope, will you, I fell in love.

I realized in the short time we had,
I had fallen for you.
But now you're back home,
I can no longer see you.

But let me tell you one thing,
I know we'll reunite.
Haven't you ever read stories?
TRUE love always ends up right.

"I love and miss you!"
-Keara

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry love. I wanted to read another one of your poems so that I could say something positive, but I can't say that I felt any better about this one, than I did of the other. It started off well, with the first two stanzas, but then the structure got lost and the words cease to rhyme. I must admit though, at the very last stanza you regained control and managed to end it well. Once again, I'm sory for being so negative, but I feel that everyone should be honest about everyone else's pieces.

    Brad

  • 17 years ago

    by YoungMynd

    This poem is so good.

    5/5