Goodbye Does Not Last Forever

by weirdboi   Apr 8, 2004


I'm still mad cause we're goin part
but know this, you'll still be in my heart
but goodbye does not last forever
cause wen u close your eyes we'll be together
i'ma be for ya night and day
but we can only wish, hope and pray
that we shall meet again another day

but when we do meet again
you'll be taller and I'll be older
we'll hug and be shoulder to shoulder
but it's gonna be hard without you by my side
but i will stand up and walk w/ pride
walk w/ pride cause you r my friend
and I'll do any thing just to see you again
but for now goodbye
so be good and stay fly
but goodbye does not last forever
cause wen u close your your eyes we'll be together

(please vote or comment cause I'm new at this and i wanna see if im good or bad or in the middle thanks)
~Richard~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brandy

    That was a great poem and ur right good-bye is not forever cause there is always a chance that u will see that person again...keep writing and good job :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Mary

    I loved it! 5!

  • 20 years ago

    by illusionsofgirls

    I think you did awesome keep it up i like this poem....you have nothing to worry about and if others think otherwise its cause they are jealous....

  • 20 years ago

    by weirdboi

    hey thanx for comenting guys

  • 20 years ago

    by paddy

    well i loved this peom it was great full of your real feeling,
    i to don't believe in saying goodbye as you'll always met the person again
    i loved your rhyming,
    i do have to agree with amanda about using proper words not slang but putting that to the side it was a great poem and you def have talent
    certainly keep it up
    great pieace
    all my love
    lorna
    xxx

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