I promise

by Chelsea   Mar 9, 2007


I promise not to follow you
the track of your bad life

you make me sad
and bring me down

but theres not a day where
i choose to let myself fall to the ground

the promise i have made you
will never be broken till my last day

i wish there was a way you could
see the pain i feel everyday

i promise not to follow you
in the track of your bad life.

xx.chelsea.xx

[ someone asked me to right a poem.
and promise them i wouldn't get into drugs. so this is towards my mom. ]

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  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I hope that this is a promise 4ever
    your friends will make this a hard promise one day there's no way to stop that from happening. Its a part of life teenagers always
    have to try dumb stuff but. you have to rise
    above them and show them that that is a losER life. BE A LEADER NOT A FOLLOWER
    yOU just made my day just hearing from you with such good news. there's so much
    bad stuff in the world that its cool to hear
    something good. cy

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Just checking iin don't forget ur promise

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Just checking to see if ur keeping ur promise
    cy

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Don't ever forget your promise cy

  • 17 years ago

    by Maggie Joseph

    Well yea.. i promised my mom alot of things like not to smoke cigarettes, weed and drink. but i started to smoke weed at the age of 12, drink age of 12 and smoke cigarettes at the age of 14..well yea. i quit smoking ciggs thank god because i don't like smelling like an ashtray, smoking weed idk its just idk..well anyways drinking stopped. well good poem...i liked it ALOT

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