Tears

by kelly tavern   Mar 10, 2007


Silents tears i wept
each and every time i slept
I see you there, your face a haze
Im hearing you speak, speak my name
forget me and live your life
it cut deep, deep like a knife
as my mother was my life
when she passed
it seemed time had elasped
nothing had meaning
as I stood there screaming
as her body was lowered
slowly ever so slowly
I stood and stared
and simply I glared
at the hole in the ground
that my mom was now bound

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautifully Disfigured

    Oh wow.... your emotions were well portrayed in this even if it was short. it gave me chills which only happens when something is good. i think you are a really good writer and honestly would do well in my contest if you want to join. there is still room. Its titled "First Contest" and im not just saying that so you will enter im saying it cuz you are an amazing writer. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    THis one is great with leixical quality and great flow. 5/5 all the way for the nice rhymes ;)
    tc

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