Exception

by MorbidCupcake   Mar 11, 2007


I cant let him see my smile
Because I'm not ready to be someones
I guess its OK to wait a while
Just as long as I know I'm good enough
But am I good enough
Would we make it that far
What really is love
Does he know who we are
Or who we seem to be
Because the disguise hides the real us
We don't let anyone in
First we need to trust
The strangers that talk to us

Everyone criticizes
Everything we do
We cant help but fantasize
When we aren't feeling like them
Were just feeling blue
Maybe its that no one cares
With the exception of you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You know what i'm feeling this too
    And if it's not your imaginery please don't take them serious
    Believe me they will be bored
    By the way the poem has good wording but it seems like unfinished,but ıther than that your flow is great
    Keep it up
    See ya
    LAURA

    PS.and i will be happy if you have time to check one of my poems

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