We rise but there alway an end

What do you think about my new poem

"A long time ago...
An infinitely long time ago...
We lived in the shadows of history.
Countless are those who have experienced
hardships,
tragedies beyond description...
it is under these circumstances, that now,
the Angel of humans will finally emerge
from the darkness."

"WE HAVE LIVED ON FOR AGES...
SO LONG, THAT OUR COUNTLESS MEMORIES
HAVE LONG SINCE TURNED ASH-GRAY."