We will rise but to the end there always be a new start

(its the same one as before but with something added meaning there never an ned to life there alway a new start)

What do you think about my new poem

"A long time ago...
An infinitely long time ago...
We lived in the shadows of history.
Countless are those who have experienced
hardships,
tragedies beyond description...
it is under these circumstances, that now,
the Angel of humans will finally emerge
from the darkness."

"WE HAVE LIVED ON FOR AGES...
SO LONG, THAT OUR COUNTLESS MEMORIES
HAVE LONG SINCE TURNED ASH-GRAY."

"Life has given me one more change to live....
So as long as i live i will love this woman
And care for her as the end of time shall,
never come to take her alway from me."