No more

by firexdancer   Mar 12, 2007


Let the sun burn out my pain,
so this will not have been in vain.
let the water smooth my face,
until of the blood there is no trace.
let the wind blow me dry,
so there will be no more tears to cry.
let the ocean take me in,
the waves can wash away the sin.
let the trees sing my song,
so for once, nothing can be wrong.

^this was just an idea, plz give honest comments
love gabriella

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  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Ooh i like it!!! its good!!! ill give ya a 5/5!! great job!!!! check out my poem: We Shared A Few Laughs.
    I think ull like it!
    this poem will go in my favs!!!
    ~*~Skye~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I really like this one. i like how it flowed perfectly and rhymed as well. great job. i can relate to it in a way. and thank you for the comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This poem isnt as good as your others. i gave it a 3. but you are still a really good writer!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh I wish it would've kept going it had such nice imagery and detail it left me wanting more nice job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh, i lik it gotta nice flow 2 it!!!

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