Lost without you

by Kaila   Mar 14, 2007


I'm tired of torture,
I'm tired of pain.
I'm stuck here broken hearted,
with nothing left to gain.

I'm done with boys.
I'm done with love.
I want to be,
with the angels from above.

I'm through with this.
This solitary life I live.
I've gave it all.
What's more to give?

You've emptied me.
Aren't you through?
You've got what you wanted.
So why am I still wanting you.

I can't love anyone like this.
I'm not supposed to,
it aches to bad.
But I'm lost without you.

You're killing me inside.
What more could you want?
I think I've gave you enough.
But in my nightmares you still haunt.

What does this mean?
I know I'm vacant inside,
But you still leave me standing here,
yet my heart...has never died.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow this is really good. like no joke, i can relate! and i know our stichs arent the same, but thats how im feeling! good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Gave should be given, but otherwise a good poem. Work on flow, maybe?

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    So that was just written so true...I'm guessing it was about a boy...But anyway..It was really good...The flow was just flawless throughout the whole thing and it was worded just right...Enjoyable read...

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Well I have read all 5 poems and I am empressed to say the least at least for my tastes you are quite good. Please don't give up on writing you have a gift just keep pen to pad and share your thought swith everyone great job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow so much emotion within, this was a great write as always. You are very talented with words, the rhyme was great. Amazing job.

    This line, "So why am I still wanting you." should have a ? at the end not a period for it is a question not a regular sentance.

    Peace, Joe

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