I like how you have used the well known technique which is repetitive.

i miss the way....

5/5 david

I like this one....
it reminds me of
alot of stuff I miss
from my ex bf...
well keep up the
good work!

Takecare...
-Jess :]

Wow.
i read this one and thought about my ex. i feel the same way. very nicely wrote. i loved it.

-Meghan

I feel this way almost every night. I know how bad it can be when suddenly you start remembering everything they did with you. I liked this, good stuff :)

Hey great poem really liked it.
its really nice keep it up!

I like it
this is a good poem
and the reader can really relate

I love it! Great poem! Very well written, an enjoyable read! 5/5

I LOVE THIS POEM!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

Danielle
XxXxX

Awww, gorgeous, 5/5!!!

...gave me chills at the end...
i know exactly how that feels
but other than that, it was a great poem
short, but still great

I like this poem a whole whole lot. I dig every emotion that is displayed in this. The repetition works well.