No More Tears

by I Seem to be the Heartless   Mar 16, 2007


Is life worth living
If you're not alive?
Is love worth accepting
If it's not felt inside?

Why am I alive?
There's no one to care.
Why am I breathing?
They don't even know that I'm there.

I'm left feeling nothing,
So why do I cry?
I'm so completely empty,
I wish I could die!

I feel so cold,
Deep inside.
I feel so lonely,
So deprived.

They're pushing and pulling
All at the same time.
Don't they know they're destroying
Mu body, soul and mind?

I know you don't notice
Whether I'm dead or alive.
But you WILL remember me
When you no longer hear me cry...

07 February 2007

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  • 18 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Maybe better word choice, like Devon said. But I really like it. It was put together nicely, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Devon

    Pretty original, need some deeper word choices, overall keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by silvershoes

    They don't even know that I'm there.
    ^ This is wearisome to read. I would write, "They don't know I'm there." It is the same idea with less words. Less is more.

    Should be "my body" instead of "mu body."

    Dark and depressing. Nicely written.

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