Daddy, i love you

by firexdancer   Mar 16, 2007


She happily jumpropes in the yard,
doesn't notice the man in his car,
he's way too silent coming up,
from behind, in one move, she drops.
She screams as her torn wrists run red,
he's leaning over her in bed,
there next to her lies a gun,
she knows that it has just begun.

One by one, the blows they fall,
'till he's almost broken them all,
but as she cries, she feels no pain,
oblivion descends like rain.
He throws her body to the ground,
an empty shell, waiting to be found,
her blood still covering his arms,
he walks away, taking no harm.

The killer sits, in his room,
as a radio plays a lonely tune,
his face buried in his hands,
he has no hope, but yet he stands.
On the wall a picture sits, for what he did avenge,
every child that he fell, was killed for his revenge.
On this picture, under the glass, four words are scrawled across,
the meaning of his angry life, the reason for his loss.

In it shows a little girl, dressed up, wearing a fairy crown,
his eyes are strangely bright, as he takes the picture down.
He remembers that one dark night, so very long ago,
ever since that wretched day, the hours have gone too slow.
The fate of his little girl, is far too true,
as the truth echoes in the words she wrote;
"Daddy, I love you"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    It made me want to cry, I was on the edge of it.

    It's flawless, once again. Amazing job, darling.

    My comments are probably useless, but I can't seem to find anything wrong, eh. I'm being honest, I promise.

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Omg! that is sooo sad! i love it!

    The fate of his little girl, is far too true,
    as the truth echoes in the words she wrote;
    "Daddy, I love you"

    i love those lines!!! thats are the greatest! i would give this a 10/10 but i can't so 5/5

    xoxo kisses

  • 17 years ago

    by Dee

    Amazing! its not too clear of what happens to the killers little girl tho. i assume she was murdered? a few typos but an overall very nice poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this is so sad:[ but you are a really good writer! i gave this poem a 5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Ooh I love a bit of action in a poem. Not sure I follow exactly-a father is killing a little girl to avenge the death of his little girl? Maybe im wrong. But it is powerful stuff either way.

    Xxx

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