You go girl!!! lol I loved this it was powerful and filled with emotion!! You did an excellent job!

Great job!!
I love this one!
If you want to, you can check out my hate you poem... I hate that person that much, so I fully understand you.. :)
But this poem is wonderful! It's absolutely perfect!

Keep up the awesome work and Take care! :)

Wow this was a powerful poem, so much emotion in it, very well written 5/5

Haha! I love this! If you don't mind can I send this to my ex? I only found two oops:

I hate the way you led me on.
With faulty words, you had me drawn.
I love you like fat kids love peas. _-- right here---
Get out of my life, and stay out please.

Are you saying that ... or did he used to say that... either try:

I hate the way you led me on.
With faulty words, you had me drawn.
'I love you like fat kids love peas.'
Get out of my life, and stay out please.

or

I hate the way you led me on.
With faulty words, you had me drawn.
I hate you like fat kids hates peas.
Get out of my life, and stay out please.

and on your last line:

I hate you how you think you won.
You hurt my heart, but i WILL move on! _- I* -

other than that... haha i loved it. Great rhyming.. awesome flow and magnifienct emotion.

5/5

This Is Such a Nice poem...I really like it