Outstanding!! i wish someone would be able to see past my fake smile...but until then, i have to pretend to be happy and show no pain. i really like this poem because in a way, it was as if it was speaking to me...well most of it anyways...thank you for posting that one
Woww!!! Thats all i can think to say right now. Just....WOWWW!!! That poem is absolutely amazing!! And it describes me. Im one of those girls walking around with the fake smile, and the tears in her eyes, just wanting someone to be there to make it better.
14 years ago
That was awesome! i loved it b/c i think every girl needs someone to be their superhero! Awesome job! 5/5!
This is a very deep, very heartfelt, very beautifully penned piece. I love it and you are defiantely going in my favorites list lol. You're amazing. I especially love the last two lines. that's what really got me. it's amazing.
thanks for the amazing write. . . .look forward to reading more.