Comments : WE ALL NEED SOMEONE

  • 15 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Just replace the otehr one with this one..good job

    melissa

  • 15 years ago

    by Pamela

    I love this poem so much. It is everything that I'm looking for. Someone who will be my hero. Great poem.

    Pamela:)

  • 15 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    That was the best poem ive read in a while...great job

  • 15 years ago

    by chelsea

    Oh wow....that is something i wanted to hear. It was amazing. i admire you cuz i have never been able to write something like that and it touched my heart. Thank you!

  • 15 years ago

    by Erin

    Aww this is reallly cute!! 5/5 check out some of mine if u want

  • 15 years ago

    by Estefania

    Hey really great poem really liked it, its really nice keep it up! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hebe

    This poem is so sweet.
    I really like it.
    Beautiful written, a pleasure to read.
    Take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Kristin

    Wow that was really beautiful. and your completely right, everyone does need something
    Great job

    Kris.

  • 14 years ago

    by ASHLEYDANIELLE NLUV

    WOW!!!! i love it sam and i had sum1 who did all tat stuff for me andthen i moved and now i we are not together anymore!! but i lvoe ya and this was great i lve y aboy AsHarris

  • 14 years ago

    by Danielle

    I really like this poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Outstanding!! i wish someone would be able to see past my fake smile...but until then, i have to pretend to be happy and show no pain. i really like this poem because in a way, it was as if it was speaking to me...well most of it anyways...thank you for posting that one

  • 14 years ago

    by Kasey

    Great poem

  • 14 years ago

    by StOrY oF a GiRL

    This is a great poem that's what we girls need, a guy that ccan write and make sweet somethings of nothings at all. Good Job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Brandy

    Woww!!! Thats all i can think to say right now. Just....WOWWW!!! That poem is absolutely amazing!! And it describes me. Im one of those girls walking around with the fake smile, and the tears in her eyes, just wanting someone to be there to make it better.

  • 14 years ago

    by homebound

    That was awesome! i loved it b/c i think every girl needs someone to be their superhero! Awesome job! 5/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by ashley

    Ur completely rite we all do need someone

  • 14 years ago

    by June

    That was such a lovely poem and so true because we all need someone.Well done on such a great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by gabriella

    Omg i love this poem i feel like the someone but i am sure soo many other peole feel that way too. it was well written charming and beautiful. i love it 5/5 good luck to the someone

  • 14 years ago

    by amber

    This is a very deep, very heartfelt, very beautifully penned piece. I love it and you are defiantely going in my favorites list lol. You're amazing. I especially love the last two lines. that's what really got me. it's amazing.
    thanks for the amazing write. . . .look forward to reading more.
    THANKS :)
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 14 years ago

    by heather

    Nice p0em! its very true!