Denial

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Mar 20, 2007


"You love him,
You love him,"
My best friend teases.

"No, I don't"
I'm in denial,
"I can't."

"Yes you do,
And you know it,"
She pesters me.

I glare and,
I whisper,
"I do not."

I don't,
And I can't,
I won't love him.

Reaching for the chain,
I intertwine my fingers,
Around its warm, hard metal.

Holding the charm
between my fingertips,
I blindly feel its surface.

I drown myself
in my thoughts,
Picturing me in his arms.

I've been through this once before,
And I don't know
If I can again.

The pain still lingers,
But so does his scent,
And his heart.

My friend snaps me
Out of dreamland,
And reminds me.

"You love him;
And don't deny it,
You always will."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    That was beautiful. the dialog was good. it was perfect. change nothing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I really didn't like the dialoge in this poem. It seemed really immature. The rest of the poem was awesome though. I really like where it picked up. But as an introduction, I would take it out. Good stuff though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww I love this poem! I can definitly relate to it heck! what girl cant? I loved how it was short yet really cute and amazing!! You took this poem to a higher level! nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really liked the style of this poem, its start out seemingly innocent and sweet but really has a darker and more heartfelt message. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I like this poem alot.
    You did a good job.
    keep writing!!
    5/5
    take care!

    ~Chelsea

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