by Travis Mar 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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I sit here on the stairs, |
by MyDevotion
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Wow I am surprized with this! When I started reading it I thought, "hmmm I don't know it seems choppy." But as I continued on I realized that it really portrays ones feelings for another! good job! 5/5! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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First off, cause you said it: NICE FORESHADOWING!!!!!!! |