My Time Alone

by Romantic Lover   Mar 21, 2007


My Time Alone

The cool ocean breeze
During a warm summer's night
With sparkles above

Sparkles above
Shine like diamonds
One the brightest
Meaning one love
Who I'll love until...

Toes in the sand
No one around
The moonlight glow
Shines on the sea
As the tides come in

This is my time alone
To reminisce and enjoy
All the luxuries I have
This air, love and life
As I gaze at the dark sky
And make a wish upon a star
That tomorrow is just as bright

Sparkles above
Shine like diamonds
One the brightest
Meaning one love
Who I'll love until...

*Written for a contest* following these rules:

Start your poem with a true haiku. ( 3 lines, syllable count 5/7/5, about nature)
Start the second verse with part of your last haiku line.

The Syllable count is as follows:

Haiku (Stanza 1): 5, 7, 5
2nd and 3rd stanza: 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
4th stanza: free syllable stanza
5th stanza: repeat your second stanza.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Excellent job on this form!!!!! Beautiful imagery!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I looove this, it was so pretty!
    I thought it was creative and the imagery created vivid pictures for me.
    Love it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good job excellent imagery keep it up gurl...amazing stuff

    melissa