Theres a lot of passion in this poem, both love and hate. Its truly brilliant.

I'm actually in hysterical tears, every memory and feelings of anger and hatred of my best mate doing this to be has come back.

you do that to absolute perfection, and i honestly thought i was the only one that thought like this i always keep saying afterwards, i'm glad he's dead, cause he hurt me so badly.

you have every emotion you go through is in this poem, and that what makes it so real, so true.
its long, and it is prefect. you have no idea how much thi spoem means to me.

thanks and well done

Wow!! That was excellent...I really really like this one although it was really really sad!! but GREAT job!

Thats some truth shit excuse my profanity thats crazy.

Wow O_o"
like in the end you just pause... and think.. lol i luved it! really nicely written
i think you put a lot.. of feeling in this one

n_n great job

Firstly, thanks for the comment it gave me hope so i hope u meant it. 2nd this poem was really good, that's why ur comment inspired me. i could feel the pain and anger almost like it had happened to me. keep writing u inspire me.

Hi, I saw that u commented on one of my poems so I thought I's check out some of urs, this one caught my eye and after reading it, i feel like my life really isn't that bad.
I love the way you right and u have a real writing talent so don't stop writing.

This pretty much made me cry, your an awesome writer, and I wish i could have the talent you do!

Keep up with the Great work!

thanx for the comment too

A little bumpy at times, but otherwise it was really good, and the name was reply to your suicide note and you protraded that also, keep up the good work

Thats a great poem keep it up ^___^

Wow That Is Very Emotional But Good!

This is a really brilliant idea for a poem, and the words themselves are great, so full of feeling xxxx

Oh, My, God!
That poem was unbelievable!
I have to say thyat it brought me to tears.
What a horrible HORRIBLE experience for you, I can;t say i relate at all but can try to empathise. Very strong and filled with the truth.
Once again i have to say that you're amazing.
Aish

Guess you're growing tired of this but.. whew! that was real cool! i could not put enough adjectives to describe the talent you have.. and the emotion! how do you that? and to think you're only 17? .. you're one hell of a poet.. keep it up!! :)

Hun that story is so incredibly deep and sad for starters, and how u got it to rhyme at the same time, i dont know how u do it. u are amazing, u truly are. Im really sorry for your loss, i understand the hate u feel towards ur friend tho, i just hope that it can go away sumday and u can forgive. But overall i am totally speechless, this is so amazing. excellent work. xox

Very deep, sad and emotional. 5/5, Em

The last line is twisted. i would be very sad if either me or my best friend thought that way of each other, and i hope that i'll never have to go through with that because obviously its a lot of hurt...

although i've felt something similar to the abandonment when my friend's brother died. i always think about how she her brother is dead while mine isn't, etc.

no matter how many times u trip and stumble, please do not give up hope, u r going to be stronger because of this and if u love ur best friend so much then u can continue to be more loving

This poem really makes you think. I love it, although I am sorry about your friend. Well, I guess friend isn't the right word, but I'm sure you know what I mean. I love it and it is very unique.

Wow that was truly deep. It makes me think about the time my friends' friend commited suicide and on how they must have felt. But wow that was sad and deep. Keep up the good work !

U make me cry ethos poem
Amazing writing
Loved each line