Luck

by Vodka   Mar 21, 2007


You're gone now.
We lost it all.
You can't catch me when I fall.
It's over.
There's nothing left.
luck can't save us from the end.

It hurt so bad,
but felt so good.
I don't feel the way I should.
I'm giving up,
the end is here.
This is exactly what I feared.
Luck can't save us.

I'm not ready yet,
to forgive you.
I know you feel the same way I do.
You lost your chance,
you let it go.
This is something I don't know...

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh man bud, if this is about the person I think it is, hes needs a talkin' to. ;)

    You can really feel the pain when you read your poems. They all flow so nicely. I like the way you use luck. (Reminds me of the "mafia" and their use of words when they're hyper...hehehe.) Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great poem, keep it up xxxxxxxxx