You didn't come.

by Miu   Mar 22, 2007


All the pain I feel tonight
You didn't come, i didn't wait.
Just now i finally opened my eyes
n close them as fast again
I'm living in a dream,
That's really a nightmare.
I can't be saved.
I'm already gone.
I wanted to wait.
but there was no one to wait for.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is a really good one, it shows so much emotion and it really is sweet but in such a sad way, if that makes sense...
    5/5
    - ali xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    THis is really great, but this would make a good chorus if you wrote it for a song or longer poem. I can see thats not really your style but it would be cool. Great job though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good poem. well done, its a good talent you are showing so keep it up. hope you are ok. take kare xxxxx

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