Vanilla Sky {Terzanelle}

by dollwithafrown   Mar 23, 2007


This is my first ever Terzanelle.

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The soul was like a beautiful lullaby,
From the opening of welcoming windows,
To the loving heart of a vanilla sky.

The warmth so eloquently wraps around us,
As we wait excitedly, holding on tight, clutching.
From the opening of welcoming windows.

Standing side by side, our bodies touching:
Hand on hand, precious heart to heart,
As we wait excitedly, holding on tight, clutching.

No one can pull our embracing arms apart,
As our excitement increases at a loving pace.
Hand on hand, precious heart to heart.

The awakening of a precious new place;
A new image surrounding a brand new day,
As our excitement increases at a loving pace.

Together we surpass this old life, and make our way,
To the loving heart of a vanilla sky.
A new image surrounding a brand new day:
The loving heart of a vanilla sky.

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A Terzanelle is a 19 line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is a repetent reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the next-to-last stanza which appears in the quatrain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I absolutely adore this...
    The first stanza had me completely hooked and from there it just kept getting better and better.
    The wording was a pleasure to read, imagery beautifully done and it flowed well throughout.
    Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    This is a greta poem with beautiful vocabulary. It's not my favorite that you've done, but it's still gorgeous.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Lol, the title reminded me of the movie, Vanilla Sky. Anyways, this was a really good first attempt. I know it's hard writing formed poetry, because you feel restricted, but you did a good job on this one. You also picked the best lines to be repeated. I still sort of don't understand Terzanelle, but one day I will learn!

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