Nature's Splendor

Rachel,I truly enjoyed this poem,We sometimes lose sight of the beauty around us,It flowed smoothly and was beautifully written.

It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.

This poem has deffintaly done me in. lol you've made it to my favorites. i love how you expressed nature in this poem. well done.

LOL sorry bout that.. the cat stepped on the keyboard.. and happened to step directly on the enter key... lol my favorite part was that last stanza... wonderful work!

5.5

You have a wonderful talent on description! You painted a beautiful image in my mind. Your vocabulary is soooo strong! I need to work on mine. Your rhyming was perfect nothing seemed forced at all. Beautiful work. I really liked this part:

-I'm very glad you have taken a liking to my poetry.. lol .. i was surprized at first when someone commented them... i usually have to ask. By the way.. the poems about pain and cutting themselves.. i just write them expressing emotions others feel, i personally don't cut myself :) If you want a little ... wait don't want to give it away. Read Do I Know You? .. of course I always return the favor ;)