A Tragedy

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Mar 25, 2007


Boy, you don't know,
What you mean to me,
You are my lungs,
My every breath.

Without you
I am worthless,
Without you
I am nothing.

You give me a reasons
To breathe,
You give me hope
To live.

Boy, you don't know,
What I'd do for you,
You are my world,
My every piece of earth.

Without you,
My love,
I'm lost hope.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    GRAWR` . The rating for this is so low !
    Okay, I agree that it isn`t you`r BEST piece, but it`s honestly pretty good to me .

    You give me
    Reasons to breathe,
    You give me
    Hope to live.
    ` I feel that it would sound better as :
    You give a reason,
    To breathe.
    You give me hope,
    To live.

    But I don`t knwo . Don`t have to listen to me lol` .

    My every piece of earth.
    `I like that [:

    Anyways, overall a 4/5 . wasn`t your best but still not that bad .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    This is not your best piece. There is nothing really special about this poem, it seemed really plain. You had a few good lines in there but that's not much. I shall wander off to read some more.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This is to be fixed. however, the site is having errors again, so ill have to waitt.....

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is pretty good, it wasn't perfect, the flow was kinda off and it wasn't so descriptive, but altogether it was sweet and very emotional, 4/5
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked this one I think you could've been a bit more discriptive but o well nice work

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