Aww thats so amazing. well done thats excellent x x x x

That was really well written and a really good poem. Good work

Jochsey

Hey.. Thanks for the comment, It helped a lot!
I loved this poem, It's great! :)
Omg sorry I repeat this "great" akll the time but However....
Ok I can say... Wonderful.. Yeah
This poem is wonderful x) lol...

Well anyway

keep up the 'wonderful' job
Take care

5/5

Nicely done, 5/5

I loved how the last line worked in. I thought this was really good, because it went from really sad.
5/5 really nicely written.

Hey,
a nicely written poem, a good flow, and uhm i have nothing more to say ^_^
kisse stephanie

I can relate to this poem.

Awww, such a beautiful poem!
You showed much of the feeling and
thoughts that goes on. Well described
and penned. God bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)
5/6 one more

This is a gr8 poem!!! luvd it gr8ly!!
keep it up
love bree x