Good poem.
keep up the good work!
5/5

~Chelsea

Aww so simple and so amazing! Really enjoyed reading this :)

I found this poem to be really sweet, It seemed heartfelt and was beautifully written. Although i didnt like how you have spaced the lines out i found the format to be off. Other then that the emotion was great strong and deep! ~Mel

I like this poem, very sweet, and I personally like the spaced out. It is simple yet, sorta tells everything you want to say. Keep up the good work.
-Ally

Hey,
so sweet =) I really like the first 4 sentences, its a bit short but still a nice poem.
keep up the good work.
kisses stephanie

Awh cute.

Comment #2

"sing me a simple love song,
to me
And i'll fall in love with you "

Very cute indeed =)
5/5
*gem*

Awww this is such a sweet poem, its beautiful

brittany (MD)

Very sweet, indeed...
keep on writing...

*isabel*

Nikki.. even though you have a bit of errors there and there.. but hey I aint perfect too.. your poem is such a beautiful written piece.. I love it good job and kee it up!!

Very cute poem. Good way to express your feelings!!

This poem was rlly sweet. i liked it. but i think it would have been much better if the layout of the poem was different.. make it into stanzas and it would look better presented.. nice poem tho

Really sweet poem that made me smile =)
i liked it...good flow and rythm and a very nice way to express your feelings!!excellent 5/5

This is so beautifully written, I love it! In some of your lines you had you're when it should have been your. Otherwise, I love this!

Great poem, good expression and good flow. i really enjoyed it.

-Syn

Simple and beautiful. The structure is great and it's very fluent. I love it!

Aww... it aws really swweet but simple it,s funny how when someone sings to you you can fall in love them or at least their voice you did a really good job

This is such a sweet poem
it is absolutely beautiful