Someone

by LOVEcanHEALorKILL   Mar 26, 2007


Help me
he says he loves me
but does he?
someone be protective
and ask
ask him straight
someone care
care ta ask
help me
loves me
is it true?
someone
someone to ask
ask out of;
protection, caring, curiosity
help me
somebody

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Hey Jen.

    I FOUND YOU!! Now I can haunt your page :]. Just kidding. I know you let me see your poems in class but I decidied I'm gonna be a really nice friend and comment them all! :].

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. I can see why you would put this under dark poems, but it could go in several other places. But whatever, that isn't as important. This poem gave me this scene of a girl sitting in a dark corner. Frightened of love's outcomes. Mascara streaking her cheeks. She is in need of security.

    Well that's what I got out of this piece. Nice job.

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