Truly how i feel.

by Amberinaa   Mar 27, 2007


Pictures of you race through my mind
Your voice rings through my ears
My heart has made it's decision
and it's as clear as crystal tears

Like my words that flow on paper
and the love between the lines
Like the dreams of us forever
and how your smile shines

Your the breeze that blows my hair
and surrounds my body tight
your the sun that wakes me up
and makes everything alright.

Everyday I'm falling deeper
Into a world thats surreal
i want to be in your arms forever
and thats truly how i feel.

* not my best, I'm not good with happiness.
its my true feelings.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I think it's excellent! You perfectly captured how I feel about my fiance, so if you did that it must be wonderful. The best poetry is the kind where others relate. And I relate very well. Awesome job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    Amber this was sweet and beautiful. I loved it. Just because its not the same mood as some of your others doesn't make it bad. I thought it was wonderful. 5/5.
    <3Raych

  • 17 years ago

    by Jasmyn

    I thought this was short, to the point, and very good. i know what you mean about happy poems being harder to right. i have the same problem. very good though. i liked it.

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