The storm

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 27, 2007


I'm in the middle of the sea
sailing away to safety
the waters peaceful and so calm
no one will know where i am

lightning starts to strike so bright
thunder banging with forceful fright
the peaceful water begins to splash
my sailing boat is soon to crash

my ship is quickly sinking down
me going with it, I'm going to drown
none is near to watch me die
cos no one ever heard my cry

saffie
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  • 17 years ago

    by Hott Mama

    Ey nice poem, its sad but also good too!! .:*.

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    I really like your poem, somehow it makes me feel at home. I also like the message behind the poem; it’s very depressing but understandable.
    I also want to thank you for your comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    This is a wonderful poem. Short, but filled with emotion. Nice work.

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by naomi

    Awww hun i rly like this 1 i think its amazin xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    Thank you for your comment.. i love the way you write ..great poem..** 5/5 good job

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