You sure have a way with words
i love this piece. ITS amazing how we are
all so f**k up' i saw a ur comment under one of mind of haiy's poems. I actually thought
after a million comments that i could help her
but instead shes worst. what was i thinking
and now i got a small piece that i got from
this poem. Its all urs. < THERES A HOLE IN
MY CHEST WHERE MY HEART USE TO BE
MY EYES THAT WERE BLIND ARE STARTING
TO SEE THINGS THAT YOU SAY I'LL NEVER
BELIEVE

What do think? why don't you write the rest. my part is urs
cy

Desperately heartbreaking.

Thanks for your comments . its hard not to
use arron lewis lyrics when his songs are all i listen too. staind is the best band ever i have had tickets to see them twice and both times i
could'nt go,something happen. anyway how ru doing

Yea i had to take words hurt off cause the
last part was from for you the part that goes your insults and your curses ' i forgot to say where it came from . i includeed a part on one of my other poems where i creit
everything changes as a part of it i forgrt whch poem let me look cy

Its called another last chance where i ended
it with WHAT COULD I REALLY SAY AND WOULD IT MATTER ANYWAY CY
ARRON LEWIS IS THE BEST SINGER AND SONG WRITER IN THE WORLD. IF REALLY WANT TO HEAR HIS BEST DOWN LOAD HIS UNPLUGGED STUFF TRY TO FIND THIS ERRIE
VERUS OF EXCESS BAGGAGE ITS CALLED
SECRET SONG ITS THE BEST IT STARTS
OUT LIKE THIS < well i know the worrds
but i can;t really speak them to you and i hide all the pain that i gain with my wisdom
from yo. omg now im in the mood . sober
is good too from the new album that whole album is the best i forget zoey thats my daughter s ringer when she calls me
cy

WOw this poem was just sooo great

::.Don't push me away
Don't push me down
Don't scream at me
Or throw me around.::

That was just so AWH! i love it!