Hello
its been a while since your last poem and i am so glad to see another poem,
its sad in many ways but toward the end there is a happy ending. a hope, a flicking light, that is burning even though its light are not that bright, but its burning to give light. i really liked how you started the poem, with how many fall for fulls, for vield face with a world of unspoken word behind it.
i wish that the ending of this poem is a reality becaue your poem is acctually happy ending, which is ironic, for you never wright of this kind. anyway, great poem
i enjoyed reading it
wish you all the best
god bless

Wow..another awsome poem by u..yupyup and red is a beautiful color...awsome poem Goran!

Ohh. I love this one, Goran. I had to read this more than once because I enjoyed it. It was beautifully penned.

5/5

Wow.
This poem was beautiful & it was very unique. Yes, it's sad it some parts but in other parts it gives the reader sweet thoughts. The flow was great & the emotions were strong. Wonderful poem! I can't wait to read more of your work soon. =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Goran...I love your work. once again, another beautiful poem. I love the use of imagery with the colors....and its nice for me because red and black are my favorite colors :) 5/5

~jas~

An unusual title for a love poem... But nevertheless, a wonderful read. I'm glad I was tottering around in the discussion forum, 't'would have been regretful had I missed it. 5/5 from me, keep up the lovely work! ^^

Wow, wonderful write like always. I loved it. The flow was good and I liked your wording.

This line, "When she hold my hands" should be, "When she holds my hands"

Peace, Joe

This poem was really beautifully written i enjoyed the structure and thought you set this out amazing. Yet another great poem by you.
~mel

I love it. thought it was really well written, thought it was adorable, and i just loved it, like i always do with your poetry. great job!5/5 like always, what else?

I liked this poem alot. It was great.
5/5
Keep up the good work!!

~Chelsea

Wow so sweet and so touching
A lady in red...*smiles*
And i agree black isn't a good color
You feel the happenings in that poem and live it
So good wording and flow
Keep it up
Laura

This is a really nice poem. I liked reading it. great work. 5/5

Kalee