I can only be me

I liked this poem.. The message was very loud and clear, it will be a much simpler world when everyone is allowed to be who they are and not forced to be something that they aren't.

I agree with 20sMiLe07 though that stanza was a little bit forced and took away from the beauty of the poem itself.. change that one stanza and the poem will be 100 times better. But other than that one little issue well done, very creative, and something that I've never read about before.

Another good poem but perhaps not s good as your rest. I feel that

Spotted, dotted
striped or mottled
You can't change a can
into a bottle

was i bit forced to be honest but still got through menaing well done ::D

xxx alex xxx

Wow i like this poem..and its really true! i believe that people are differents so if u is u and it can never be me,, and follow what u want to be not what others want u to be..be u... !great message.