Tasting Your Secret (Rictameter)

by Angie   Apr 4, 2007


Tasting Your Secret

secret
whispers during
passionate night foray
tenderly caressing, kissing
heated bodies entangled head to toe
tongue licking, lips softly suckle
slowly making sweet love
I'm tasting your
secret

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very interesting poem, it is short but very effective. You created superb atmosphere. Form of this piece is also great. It deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is so elegant and beautifully written. Every line is flawless, and the whole poem is filled with emotions. Greatly created atmosphere in it amazes me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    I love it. Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Well sookie, sookie now!! LOL