Good!

This poem is very elementary, dear. There is no structure, no rhyme, no depth. It has a conflict, I will give you credit for that. But I must be honest, this is no better than a 3.

This is quite an interesting topic, and I like your unique chjoice, but you might want to leave out some of the "." at the end and add commas. That might help a bit. Other than that, probably 4/5
Keep it up :D
Hatori

I found this to be interesting but to me the word choice was just to commen. There was no ryhme throughout this and the structure isnt their. i found the choice to be some what unique though so well done on that ~mel

Parts of this were good (and it doesn't need to rhyme, i don't know why some people insist on rhyming but i rarely do). it didn't flow very well though. you broke the lines up more for size purposes than for any type of rhythm.

"We are on are way.
to win or loss,
that I don't know,
but I know what to do,"

I thought that was your best as far as flow goes. just my observations, i'm no expert so take it for what its worth.

This poem to me had no feeling I know you said how you felt but I guess I was just expecting more

This was good.
However I think the flow was off a bit
4/5

[Sarah]

The flow was off a little bit, and it isn't very deep, but you can only get better with time. I liked it and I will give you an a for effort. 4/5

Another great poem by you. again you have proved your great talent here.
another 5/5 from me.

I enjoyed the conflict you portrayed in this.
I thought that the flow was off a little in places, and I didn't find very much depth in the piece.
However, I enjoyed the imagery, I thought you did a great job with that.

I think you meant cooked on your last line, other than that a good write it had difference and that what makes some poetry unique. I like different poems that make you htink well done

xxx alex xxx (2)

Ok first it still wasnt creative enough for me think you should check out merriam webster online dictionary and look for some synanyms for some of the dull words that are boring this poem down

Very nice, keep up the good work!

"loss" < lose.

I don't like poems that don't rhyme. I guess I just realized none of your poems have rhymed.. And, I'm on like the ninth or tenth one. Lol. But, overall it was a good poem. I liked the concept of it, but the flow was a bit shaky, eh. You did a good job, though.

I liked this.. it was an intresting topic to write about.. the point of view of someone waiting to play.. very good.. keep up the good work..

Hmm.. this was a preaty good poem, and the spelling and grammer seemed fine to me the only thing I can say was it seemed kind of childish like I didnt get any sort of message or anything behind it. so because of that I cant give it a very good rating. srry. keep trying.

I thought that it was ok. Not your best work, but still a good poem. There could have been a little bit of a better ending than the one you have chosen. And maybe try to put more meaning into it, 4/5

This was an interesting choice but at the same time the flow was off.. I know you can do better.. it was a little confusing as well.. but nice try though 3/5

4/5 it was alright, confusing to me.

I thing it was ok it was amazing or any thign but it was crapy 4/5