The Rythm of Life

by Raging Rikku   Apr 5, 2007


Life is rhythm
a beat you just have to inhale
cause once you come in to the life
theres always a sound

They try to attach themselves to you
by hitting the right emotion
different types and beats are needed
for a most fruitful verity

Sound brings hope and life
to those who have none
or increases the feeling
that they have at that moment

enraging or embracing
the rhyme can't be stopped
because it is the most influential
way of life ever brought to mankind

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  • 18 years ago

    by Yuna

    This poem has so much to offer. You captured it all and with it you made a beautiful poem that i really enjoyed. the flow was there and I think it great that you came up with this kind of poem idea. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Hiya Byron =)
    That was a beautiful poem and very true as to what is needed and what you just have to live with in this funny, strange thing called life =D
    Look forward to reading more of your work in the future :)
    Rhea (Rhiannon Morgana)

  • 18 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    Well written, I like it!
    5/5

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